Our fun run was so fun because we all enjoy it
1st place for the year 6 girl's was Mary
2nd place was Tina
3rd place was Nejwa
1st place for the year 6 boys was Paea
2nd place was Maikolo
3rd place was
1st place for the year 5 girls was Fifita.U
2nd Vika
3rd Sylvia & Vasiata
I came 4th place for our school fun run I tried my best when I was running but I was really proud of my friend Mary that she came 1st place in school fun run.I was !HAPPY! for my little brother Ita he came the same place as me 4th place I was really happy because you can tell that he was trying his best.
Teili I love your video it is so good you have did the right photos and the thing I like about your video is that well the video was playing there was some descriptions.
ReplyDeleteWow this is an awesome video Teili well done. You put in a great effort in the fun run too!
ReplyDeleteHi Teili I like your work and your video but I didn't come 2 place I came third place and well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Teili I like how you did a video of the fun run it looks awesome Teili.
ReplyDeleteCheers.
Hey Teili I love your fun run video it amazing I like how you put on the people that came first second and third.
ReplyDeleteHey,Teili
ReplyDeleteI like your slideshow about The Fun Run and I like the way you stand up for your self like you said that you came 4th place and you didn't madder at all so you just TRY YOUR BEST,but next time you should write more word about The Fun Run we did at school.
Do you feel happy when you came 4th.
Well done
Hey Teili,
ReplyDeleteI like how you did a video for the fun run and some writing about who came 1,2 and also 3.
But you really need to proof read you work at the bottom of the writing.
Next time you should go and call for help to check your work.
From:Maxine
Hey Teili,
ReplyDeleteI like how you did a video for the fun run and some writing about who came 1,2 and also 3.
But you really need to proof read you work at the bottom of the writing.
Next time you should go and call for help to check your work.
From:Maxine